Today is the first ever Mindful Writing Day, and I almost missed it.

Small Stones is a term used by Fiona Robyn, from Writing Our Way Home, to describe a moment when you stop, focus and really pay attention to one thing and write it down, using words that evoke the senses.

I began gathering my stones in Methodist Hospital last week, while waiting there with my mother during my dad's surgery. I'm not sure if I did it right, but in any case, these are a few stones I gathered to share. Others gathered today…more private…I've tucked away in my heart.

 

Low voices. Muffled laughter. Squeaks and rattles and hums of carts and curtains and beds. Seconds tick in slow motion. Nearness and life press into heart and memory.

Momma's breath, rising, falling in sleep. Curtain-filtered light softens the lines on her face so close to my own, erases the years to a time when she was the night watchman who guarded my slumber.

Hospital time, measured in tap-tap-taps of IV drips, a succession of television shows, and nurse visits. 

Purses and bags of hospital-waiting necessities dangle from above. Snacks, medicine, writing material, books. Daddy's street clothes rest in Mama's lap, wrapped in a clear bag. Excuse me, excuse me, and everyone smiles, opens doors, makes room for the pretty lady in the wheelchair and her klutzy driver.

 

Check out the other stones on Writing Our Way Home and on the Mindful Writing Day Facebook page. And join me in the Rivers of Stone Challenge this January – write one stone every day. 

 

"Pay more attention and fall in love with the world." ~ Fiona Robyn



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9 responses to “Small Stones from Methodist Hospital”

  1. Ms. A Avatar

    When I read the title, I thought you were going to say your Dad had stones. Klutzy driver…. LOL!

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  2. Barbara Shallue Avatar

    Oops! I guess I failed the clarity portion!! lol

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  3. Gail Dixon Avatar

    That you have the presence of mind to write these things down so coherently says a lot about your strength. Impressive, Barbara. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Suldog Avatar

    You certainly took the time to listen well. Those bits capture the hospital experience very well. I was almost (reluctantly) transported back to the hours on end spent in such places during My Dad’s final years. Aside from having a wonderful attitude, you are quite the writer, my friend.

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  5. Barbara Shallue Avatar

    In all fairness, there wasn't a whole lot else to do but sit and listen and watch,  and for me, writing is therapy and a great distraction. ๐Ÿ™‚ But thank you!!
     

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  6. Lady Fi Avatar

    I hope that both your parents are now doing well!

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  7. Wolf Pascoe Avatar

    All that endless waiting in hospital rooms and corridors. It’s a betwixt and between experience, out of time, where we pay attention to the smallest things.

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  8. Barbara Shallue Avatar

    It truly is a twilight zone. And despite the slowing down and paying attention, I don't like it a bit.
     

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